Metaphor Poem

                             Metaphor Poem

A little weird from the bottom to the top 

But how do I express what I feel if your just a person I just met. 

Yes, every friend is just a stranger at best. 

All you gotta do is pass a little test. 

Will you be able to be my friend.

Don't worry I'll keep an open mind. 

 Alright First off, let me say we'll be friends in some little time. 

Yeah, I used to be a little uncomfortable those other times. 

Gotta give me the right stuff  to keep you in my mind.  

Being comfortable, now thats a sign.

When we were hanging, this isn't nothin'. 

This could actually becoming somthin'. 

You know I'm fine with you becoming my friend 

You'll get my protection, cause 

You're my friend. 

I'm your totoro, will you be mine?

Poem essay draft

 Life always has complications. Complications that later have a solution. Problems present themselves throughout our lives, "A Coney Island Life" by James L. Weil explains to us that problems in our life should be treated as answers waiting to be solved.

In "A Coney Island Life" by James L. Weil the author compares chances in life to a carousel game. "... how many more times around I have to catch that brass ring sun before the game is up".  He expresses that life has many opportune moments to solve a problem just like how a carousel game is played. He explains how we have many chances to solve the many problems we have. " I take perhaps my last ride on this planet carrousel". He expresses that life has a finite amount of chances to solve something.  He explains that time is a precious thing to be hold, that it has a timer ticking down every time we hold on to time something may be left undone.

Throughout life we have problems that present themselves. Problems already solved or not touched at all. "...and seen my helium hopes breaks skyward without me". He explains that a balloon being represented as his hope or dreams. 

 
As our life chugs on we have problems that are obstacles can be solved with time.